viola!!
Labels:
poetry
amaranthine thoughts,
a face avowed,
purplish-red colour,
unforgettable abode....
an epitome of goodness,
a messenger of god,
a person i admire,
an angel abroad....
a void in my heart,
she fills with a leer,
a glitter on her face,
and everything seems so near....
31 comments:
Beautiful and eloquent.
:o)
Beatiful poem:)
helllooo dear!!!
Thanks Sharad, for such a lovely compliment..
and hindi is our mother tongue, we can depits as many emotions is it..
Anyways, love to read your words..
precise yet beautiful.
aha... romantic to the core. Very Nice. :-)
yet again, love the simplicity and directness! short and brimming with meaning..great!
:x is dis inspired from my poetry??
ok no kidding!
beautiful...description of an angel
Romance at its best....
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ahhhhh beautiful..... u didnt hv to be soo obvious!!!!! i know thats for me!!!!! :P hehe me kiding!!!!!!!
Sharad,thanx..:).the poem is so touching,,and i feel flattered:P,so is viola the name of the pira?;)
Thats lovely! Great writing Sharad!
wow!! sharad thats sweet n goes like chocolate in my mouth..beautiful
so near yet so far....beautiful..
hey ur blog is vivid n fresh.. gr8 going!! :)
Hello Sharad,
Just visit to give you a sweet smile :)
yup sure mate...kabhi milo to ;)
so when is coming the next sharad masterpiece??
quite romantic! nice
:) wonderful! You are only getting better..keep dreamin'!
a void in my heart,
she fills with a leer,
a glitter on her face,
..
these three lines are jarring and upset the whole tone of the poem. is this what you intended?
Oi, achei teu blog pelo google tá bem interessante gostei desse post. Quando der dá uma passada pelo meu blog, é sobre camisetas personalizadas, mostra passo a passo como criar uma camiseta personalizada bem maneira. Até mais.
romantic maaan , i hope i culd write some thing for my loved one too
tht was beautiful!
keep writing..
Viola- beautiful title. A beautiful name as a beautiful violet. ( my niece's name is Viola).
Good luck in poetry path.
I'll be your constant reader.
Nice..
We see a budding poet...:)
Great..n all the best!
ah but she is an epitome beyond words!!
beautifully expressed!!!
@ all
thanx :)
keep visiting!
sharad
read again.... lovey again
Hi Sharad,
How are you doing man!!!
Seems to be lost from blogging..
Hope, everything wil be right at your end..
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii where have u been?
"accidentally" read it again,,it's really heart-warming,hope that every thing is okay with you,,
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