Saturday, May 19, 2007

solitude..


With deep seated thoughts,

loneliest night of the week,

vivid mental images,

I walked an empty street.


Dark were the shadows,

deserted were the ways,

my mind so cryptic,

I was just cursing those days.


Grim rainy weather,

I felt as if I am done,

I pinched my right arm,

my feelings were so numb.


The cloudburst suddenly poured,

crushed with grief and sorrow,

I looked in the mirror,

only to see the dark tomorrow.


A chill went through my body,

I thought of the moment again,

I was so heart broken,

dejected, dismal, insane.

24 comments:

confessing7girl said...

hey u hv a new template!!!!!! i love it!!!:D good work!! ur poem is beautiful...
for u not to be sad about not getting honored im linkin to ur blog!

ani said...

:) touching!

Anonymous said...

DAMN!! GOOD WORK...awsome..felt almost there..gr8 expression friend...
going thru ur blog seems..u have also lost some one very close..

Anonymous said...

Good poem,,but it sounds so sad! what put you in such a depressing mood?

Anonymous said...

its so sad and touching.....
keep writing!

Priya said...

Why most of your poems are very sad:))

Jeya Anand said...

hey great post....looks like the season is solitary now...everywhere in the blogs...

Tapasya said...

I loved the way it has been written. The second last stanza is very touching.
And a nice template! (Im too bad at HTML despite being into computer engg and all, I still dont know how to add tabs and how to have that image on my fromt page, lol).

Impressionist said...

great poem amigo!! :)
keep writin!!
i love the pic, i too have used the same picture in one of my very old posts!

peace & Love
JeevY

Tina said...

Brilliant...you write very well...Tina xoxo

Anonymous said...

That wa never urs..yeah we al say that...but we still want them to hold on...

shnaggy said...

walk on empty street...
that would make my heart pump faster.
nice poem and nice photo.

Shruti said...

Lovely, but solitude doesnt always means lonely and unattached, it sometimes make you feel so good and attached to that power which is supreame and higher..
Take care...

All Is Whole said...

very well done!!!!!!!!!!

Anonymous said...

Hi Sharad,
You havent read my tag thorughly, I have written there you have to make a 5 times loop to see my tagged blogs.hehehe.. :)

Well, lovely way ofexpression.. Simply love it..

Bharti Bedi said...

nice emotions..

krystyna said...

Hi Sharad!
I remamber that I visited you and write under this post, but I wrote my commt little bit below. (mistake)
so this is my thought:

I hope you are in perfect mood now.
I love that deep touching, emotional poem. Life it is not only the happiness.

I wish you a lot of happiness!

Priyanka Sarkar said...

very well written

N@nc! said...

I see that I have cool writers friends here!!! ;)

Anoo. said...

it's is sad and anguished... a touching piece, but i hope you are all right... :)
take care.

mystic rose said...

i hope not really.

as a poem ofcourse its great. well done! :)

Phoenix said...

aww sharad now i kow what u meant when u commented on my poem...your poem is heart rendering...*HUG*

Skinsleuth said...

Sad but a nice read. :)

soumya mukerji said...

Beautiful... I've felt this way too... a lot.. but you know, sometimes sad solitude feels beautiful too... makes me feel stupidly human.