amor..
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A moonlit night,
and a faint breeze,
the sound of birds,
the silence of trees!
Her deep blue eyes,
hit me with a fiery pace,
the scent of a rose,
and a tickled pink face!
I held my breath,
took all the blame,
she turned around,
she called my name!
My thoughts so vivid,
mirror like limpid,
my eyes weren’t blinking,
dumbstruck, dumbfound, Cupid!
27 comments:
Hi dear, Moonlit Night...
How beautiful everything seems under it....
Just imagining the beauty fo natural light...
Take care...
Hmmmm...
You are such a romantic...
he he he, the description you've given at the end, dumbstruck, dumbfound, Cupid! rightly fits the image pic u've used..
wat a coincidence.
Hi Sharad!
I love your romantic poem and this beautiful rose -leaves.
Have a great weekend time!
:) thats a real nic poem..:)
Thanks for dropping by my space.
~jewel
amazing...and what really got my attention was the title in portuguese...amor (love)!! great writting
beautiful!
altho... hate to say this, but the sound of birds on a moonlit night?
could be..
lovely images!
and thanks for linking me!
Romantic!
Nice poem, expressive.
Something's definitely wrong!![;)][:D]
@ vatsala
what's wrong [:O] .. lolz
something with d poem?? [;)]
plz lemme knw! [;)][:D]
wonderful imagery..and even more beautiful an expression...loved it!:D
nice one...thanks and welcome to my site
lovely poem brotha!
i've linked ur blog
will be back later
surely defies the fact that lust is not all about being justified in the corporal sense....it sure is ignited by the deep writhed spiritual desire....its just the sheer thought of it which acts as the propellant...
amor.....it gave also my atention...means love!!!
do u know portuguese language?!!
eheheh
anyway...nice poem! soooo romantic!!!
kisses!!
amor...te amor...:)
Keshi.
Hi dear, thanx for adding me in ur list...I really feel good...
Take care of urself...
Sharad thnx :)
Dumbstruck dumbfound Cupid...!!
True true true!!
Very nice work...sweet and typically romantic ;-)
the poems just....PERFECT!
;-)
nicely written...
hahahahaha... love makes you look cute and ridiculous at once. :-)
Moon has forever been a companion to love and lovers. The setting offers a greater romance to the poem.
Nice :-) and Keep writing!
Cheers!
Meenakshi
Hi Sharad, BEAUTIFUL!!!
Keep posting :)
btw i blog rolled you...hope you donot mind...moreover check my blog for tag questions!i tagged you!:D
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