chronic~
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poetry
ever and anon
we laughed,
we cried.
at times so often
we fought,
we lied.
unending thoughts
those tiffs, beams, laughs and cries
I could hear them all
bonding us alive.
boundless they seem
away afar
the feelings I say
unremitting ajar.
8 comments:
"aaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww"
I like this poem:-)
:)
omg~!
did love make u a poet:O>?:P
@ butterfly
:P
u could have restricted the number of "a"'s & "w"'s in that and i would have still got the meaning. :D :P
@ felicia
thnx :)
@ ana
errrr! i have writen poems before :X and i was bored to death last night. :P
and i instantly thought of my sister after readin this! :)
Hi Sharad,
Wow!!!The feeling so pure and eternal..
u wud've sue got d meanin! but not the depth of the aaww :)
Beautttiful... it is lovely. :-)
great job. :-)
Cheers!
Ps. This is Meenakshi from Kshanik Insaan. changed my blog address, this is the new one.
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