~~ aphotic panorama ~~
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dark besotted night
a pint-sized glim
chaotic sky
caliginous, dull and dim..
redolence of mud
dew swamped leaves
careless, affable waves
caressing at her feet..
an aura that sweeps
the ever soaring cries
ensconced in a wooden bench
she closes her eyes..
a pint-sized glim
chaotic sky
caliginous, dull and dim..
redolence of mud
dew swamped leaves
careless, affable waves
caressing at her feet..
an aura that sweeps
the ever soaring cries
ensconced in a wooden bench
she closes her eyes..
P.S. I know that the picture doesn't go with the verse =)
32 comments:
GREAT POEM:P
lovely man...
.so it seems u r in mumbai now...courtesy : ur previous post;)
Rock out there!!:)
eheheheh seee u talk about my template but you did the same =P
by the way, great poem ;)
Hi Sharad!
You are young, talented poet!
Your word paints a subtle moment.
I think this interesting pic correlates with your amazing poem.
I wish you good luck and all the best during your vacation time. I hope it will be blessing time!
beautiful poem and i think the picture kinda adapts!! :D
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I had to use online dictionary a minimum of 3 times to understand your poetry, and once i understood it completely I am speechless.
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Jeevy
hmmm.. :)
the words though are lovely. lovely images you've created.
the vision that the words weave is magical!...
"a pint-sized glim
chaotic sky" - brilliant!!!!!
:o
:o
tell me seriously.... wht was ur intension? to write a poem or show of ur jargon or confuse innocent ppl like me?
fine! i;ll read it whn i m in a sensible state of mind wit dictionery!
wow!!
beautiful and heart acheing..both at the same time...!!
squeezed my heart but so lovely poem!!!
great poem i think...drop me a line
@ nabila
thnx :)
@ snaggy
thnx :)
@ felicia
:) hope u doin well.. and thnx :)
good one
Wishing you good luck!
this is awesome stuff
gr8
tc
alok
Hi Dear,
wonderful expression..
touche...
Greetings!
par ab meinee dictionery use kar lee:-)
it was lovely! i dont wanna use further flowery adjectives n insult it!
n ya wots wit girls on bench! first d story n now dis! hmmmm.... kuch to hai
hi!!!
@ dhawal, kystyna, alok, shruti, phoenix, soul&body
hi.. and thnx for ur comments :)
@ butterfly
girls on bench :O hmmm kuch toh hai..
pata nahi, maybe, i dunt know.. lols :D :D ;)
Hi sharad,
Lovely words..
And ya , ur word power is superb..
Great intresting words..
hello!! how r u doing?
Superb! I loved the last line...it just marks a very diff type of conclusion.
Instead of writing that picture is not matching with verse you should have write, find out the striking contrast between picture and verse.
That might had created the inflow of imagination from all bloggers
Smiles :)
I wish you
A Very Happy Independence Day!
good one!
nice read. I would love to follow you on twitter. By the way, did anyone learn that some chinese hacker had busted twitter yesterday again.
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